First Draft of Music Video

This is the first draft of my music video. I like how some sections have turned out but there are a lot of changes I need to make in my next draft. Firstly, I need to re-film some of the footage, such as the lip-sync sequences, due to them being out of time, and some of the scenes of Emily in the green room because there is a really noticeable reflection of the lighting in Emily's glasses. These things take away from the professional look I want my video to have so I will ensure they are amended. In addition, I have not filmed about half of the shots for the video so there are many blank spaces in this draft, which will be filled by the next draft.